Above the Clouds

From Mountain Springs to the Edge of AI in Silicon Valley

Xuan Xin

September 26, 2026 · San José Public Library, Calabazas Branch

How It Began

AI arrived, and I was inside it
Past forty, looking back down the road
Tech moves fast—unwritten, it's gone

When It Was Written

  • March · a day for the outline,
    a week for the first draft
  • Then · revision after revision
    • Simplified: 55 versions
    • Traditional: 31 versions
    • English: 44 versions
  • September · pen down

Where It Was Written

  • Hotels
  • Planes
  • In bed
    half asleep

A Hilton hotel room in Charlotte: desk, writing table, kitchen counter

The Time and Places of the Book

1980 — 2026

A mountain village, 1980s
Campus, 1990s
The internet, 2000
Wall Street numbers
Silicon Valley cloud and AI

The Book · Three Parts, Twelve Chapters

PART ONE
Hometown
Mountain · Road · Gate · Fire
PART TWO
China
Song · Flag · Sea · Net
PART THREE
Abroad
Street · Valley · Cloud · Emptiness

Four chapters to a part, one character to a chapter; twelve chapters, fifty sections.

The People in the Book

221 characters

S8 core
A50 major, vivid
B95 with a scene
C/D68 glimpses, crowds

Core characters

Father · Mother
The classmate who always came first
Aunt J · Ding Lei
Wang Chen · Guo Yu

The Aesthetics

Literature · Calligraphy · Ink Painting · Form

Literature: from the countryside to technology

What Is Native-Soil Literature?

  • Named by: Lu Xun, 1935
    preface to Compendium of New Chinese Literature: Fiction II
  • Who writes it: people who left home for the city
    and look back at home
  • What it's about: village people, land, customs
    with nostalgia, and with scrutiny

Lu Xun, My Old Home
↓
Shen Congwen, Border Town
↓
Mo Yan · Jia Pingwa · Chen Zhongshi, White Deer Plain

Native-soil literature can often only be written after you leave.

Aesthetics · Native Soil

Chapter 1, Mountain · the motif of the whole book

I often wondered
what it would feel like
to lie on those clouds.

Our rock became
someone else's garden stone.

Part One · In the Soil, and Out of It

Chapter Scenes Native soil?
1 Mountain The village: spring · mud · stone Pure native soil
2 Road Village school, dirt roads, the classmate who came first Mostly native soil
3 Gate Entrance exams, technical school, failing,
borrowing money for Jianyang High
Transition: village to county town
4 Fire County high school: city kids are at ease,
"I came from the mountains, always a bit stiff"
Leaving: country meets city

The soil is richest in the first two chapters; chapters 3 and 4 are about walking out of it.

From Native-Soil Literature to Tech Literature

Mountain · Road  →  Gate · Fire  →  Song · Flag · Sea · Net · Street · Valley · Cloud · Emptiness

Leave, then look back and write.
Lu Xun did it with his hometown.
It works for technology too.

Aesthetics · Tech Literature technology, made literary

The data no longer came
from server rooms and formulas.
It came from the road,
from the cars,
from lidar and sensors running around the clock.

It wasn't just plain numbers
in a table anymore.
More often,
it was images,
video,
and frame after frame of point clouds.

Ch. 10 · Valley

Aesthetics · Tech Literature people, made literary / technical

Kicking off a project had its own ritual too.
Jeff had the whole team drive out
to the Princeton office in New Jersey
for Sprint Planning.
The room was huge.
The team was huge too—
over a hundred people.

We held a lot of meetings,
ordered a lot of pizza,
and made a lot of decisions.
He tried to bring in technology
that seemed as solid and scalable as he was—
things like Cassandra and Redis.

Ch. 9 · Street

When Technology Becomes Literature

Roche
Why Literature Matters in the 21st Century

Stronger technology
→ stronger instrumental reason
→ literature matters more

Literature transcends technology

Above the Clouds
 

Technology → human experience
→ memory → language
→ literature

Technology enters literature

Roche asks how literature can transcend technology.
I want to ask how technology can enter literature.

https://diary.wu-99.com/20260425_zh.html

Tech Literature · The Birth of a New Literature?

As industrialization and digitization speed up,
the old rural idyll is probably gone for good.
Every era has its own literature.
In the age of IT and AI, writing people through technology—
I call it tech literature.

Science fiction
uses literature to imagine technology.

Tech literature
uses literature to understand
people in a technological age.

1Point3Acres · Workplace forum · "Tech Literature: The Birth of a New Literature?" · August 9, 2026
https://1point3acres.com/home/thread/1185674

Replies from the Forum

This genre might be called… science fiction.

Coders can't even out-code AI—what chance does writing have?
Uber drivers probably write better.

Meet AI, and coder literature becomes "scar literature" the day it's born.

Writing is good. Everyone should write.

The forum's mainstream mood doesn't suit writing…
too restless.

Support you, keep going!

1Point3Acres · anonymous replies · August 2026 · translated from Chinese

Swap Out the Technology—Same Story?

He turns on the computer.
The GPU fans roar.
The model starts training.
He looks out the window and thinks of home.

He starts the car.
The engine roars.
The car pulls onto the highway.
He looks out the window and thinks of home.

Swap the technology and the story barely changes—technology is just scenery.
That is literature writing about technology, not yet technology becoming literature.

Technical Terms, Turned into Images

As a child
eyes → mountain

Later
sensors → data → model → world

As machines get better at "seeing" the world, how do people still see it?

Capital never rests.
Neither do the clouds.

Ch. 11 · Cloud

The clouds I looked up at as a child;
the cloud at work,
a system that never goes down.
Childhood clouds drift by;
the clouds of the tech age can't stop.

A life is not a smooth curve.
It's more like a system—deployed, rolled back, migrated, refactored.

Version 1 · Reorg · Acquisition · Shutdown · New model · Layoff · AI

Aesthetics · Calligraphy

Title
Preface
Practice

The title, the chapter names and the preface are all in my own hand.

Aesthetics · Ink Painting






Leaving space empty

Aesthetics · Ink Painting the last page of each chapter

Aesthetics · Ink Illustrations

Mountain
Song
Net
Valley

The second page of each chapter: a painting whose edges bleed like ink, with a passage of the text laid over the white space.

Aesthetics · Form

One character per chapter, two per section; short lines, white space between.
Twelve chapters for the twelve months; fifty sections, the Great Expansion number of the I Ching;
three hundred sixty pages, the three hundred sixty degrees of the heavens.

Seven hundred eighty-nine passages, over eight thousand seven hundred lines,
sixty-six thousand characters to hold nearly fifty years of a life.
The first four chapters tell of home; the middle four, travels in China; the last four, years abroad.

One Character per Chapter · Twelve Characters

山 Mountain
路 Road
门 Gate
火 Fire
歌 Song
旗 Flag
海 Sea
网 Net
街 Street
谷 Valley
云 Cloud
无 Emptiness

Two Characters per Section · Fifty Sections

Hometown

MountainSpring · Mud · Stone
RoadFirst · Dirt Road · Fork · Gone
GateDoorway · Technical School
Off the List · School Gate
FireBonfire · Candlelight
Hot Pot

China

SongUniversity · Clubs
Embroidered Ball · Audition
Conductor · Outlet · Echo
FlagNational Day
Rehearsal · Inspection
SeaAunt J · Exams · Calligraphy
Green Garden · Crossing · Sparrow
NetSky · Guangzhou · Noodle
Cleaver · Bet · Turtle

Abroad

StreetBloomberg
Wandering · Hedging
ValleyAds · Healthcare
Transportation
CloudSigning · Roots
Inflection · Storm
EmptinessArt · Existence
Genius · Impermanence

One character per chapter, two per section (in Chinese). Fifty sections, the Great Expansion number.

Form · Set Against Dante's Divine Comedy

The Divine Comedy Above the Clouds
Structure Three parts: Inferno · Purgatorio · Paradiso Three parts: Hometown · China · Abroad
Divisions 100 cantos (1 + 33 × 3) 12 chapters · 50 sections
Numbers Three, the Trinity Twelve months · the Great Expansion · the circle of heaven
Meter Terza rima One character per chapter, short lines
Journey From the dark wood to Paradise From a mountain village to above the clouds

Dante built a cosmos; Above the Clouds measures a life.

A comparison of structure, not stature.

Part One · Hometown Mountain · Road · Gate · Fire

Age two, with my father
Primary-school graduation

That gate was built for many people.
But that year,
one brick
was left for me.

Ch. 3 · Gate

But I still remember that little fire.
Small,
but very bright.

Ch. 4 · Fire

Part Two · China Song · Flag · Sea · Net

Professor Strang's linear algebra class at MIT

When you had no money,
you felt hollow inside.

Ch. 7 · Sea

Once the boat leaves shore,
you're not the person you used to be.

Ch. 7 · Sea

Part Three · Abroad Street · Valley · Cloud · Emptiness

Playing "Chengdu" outside the White House
A jam in the Times Square subway station

The world is vast.
Vast enough to hold many ways of living.

Ch. 9 · Street

Wandering alone, everywhere—
maybe it was only a way of searching for the road home.

Ch. 9 · Street

I think maybe "genius" is only
someone who walks the same road a little faster.

Ch. 12 · Emptiness

Why Short Lines?


A reader asked:
why write it like poetry,
when it's really prose?

Explain a little less,
and let memory
rise on its own.

Gu Long · the opening of The Sword and the Moon

Is the edge of the world far?
No!
A man is at the edge of the world—how can it be far?

What color is the moon?
Blue, blue as the sea,
as deep, as melancholy.

Where is the moon?
In his heart;
his heart is the moon.

And the saber?
The saber is in his hand!

Question, answer; one sentence to a line. Not a word of explanation.

Short Lines · Gu Long and Above the Clouds

Is the edge of the world far?
No!
A man is at the edge of the world—how can it be far?

And the saber?
The saber is in his hand!

Gu Long: he asks, he answers, and the answer is final

Such a large rock—
gone.

Who took it?
No one knew.
Where did it go?
No one knew either.

A rock was just a rock.
Gone was gone.

Ch. 1 · Mountain · Stone: questions again; the answer is "no one knew"

The same question and answer. Gu Long's answer is a saber; mine is emptiness.

Writing in Five Languages

船一旦离岸,你就不再是原来那个人了。Simplified Chinese

船一旦離岸,你就不再是原來那個人了。Traditional Chinese

Once the boat leaves shore, you're not the person you used to be. English

Una vez que el barco abandona la costa, ya no eres la misma persona. Español

船が岸を離れると、あなたはもはや同じ人間ではありません。日本語

Ch. 7 · Sea

Many Languages · A Happy Accident of Translation

在人死去之后,
在人生无解的时候,
在人知道终将失去的时候。
停下来。

when life has no answer,
when you know you will lose in the end,
you stop.

失去 → lose: both "to lose something" and "to be beaten." Impermanence—and being replaced by stronger minds, by AI.
https://diary.wu-99.com/20260606_zh.html

Many Languages · Quotation Marks and Allusions

不用担心,
“天生我材必有用。”

Chinese: the marks fence off the allusion—"he is quoting"

"Don't worry—
Heaven endowed me with talent;
it is bound to be of use."

English: the whole line goes in quotes—"someone is speaking"

Both are right. One marks the allusion, the other marks the voice.

https://diary.wu-99.com/20260717_zh.html

Many Languages · 人 and 大

看见她躺在草坪上打电话,
一会儿像一个“人”字,
一会儿又变成一个“大”字。

Chinese habit of seeing: the shape of a character is a posture (人 "person," 大 "big," a figure with arms spread)

sprawled out—
arms and legs stretched wide across the grass.

English: describe the body, not the character

Ch. 10 · Valley · https://diary.wu-99.com/20260717_zh.html

Many Languages · Massachusetts and Sparrow

麻省 · 麻雀

书名是:
麻雀理工大学。
我愣了一下。

Chinese: no explanation needed; readers' eyes blur the two on their own

Massachusetts · Sparrow

The title was: Sparrow Institute of Technology.
In Chinese, Sparrow and Massachusetts look similar in writing.

English: the two words look nothing alike, so it takes one more sentence

In Chinese the joke is in the eye; in English it has to be told.

Ch. 7 · Sea · Sparrow

Many Languages · Simplified vs. Traditional Is More Than Swapping Characters

Simplified Traditional
Different glyphs 数据 · 网络 數據 · 網絡 a converter can do it
Different names 披头士's Hey Jude 披頭四's Hey Jude a converter can't

Machine conversion can change the glyphs, not the habits.
The Beatles are 披头士 on the mainland, 披頭四 in Taiwan.

Ch. 10 · Valley

Many Languages · Chinese Breaks Lines, English Makes Sentences

那时候我们的系统跑得很快。

有时候屏幕上的盈亏
每秒钟会变动上千万美元。

Chinese: one thought, said in several breaths

Our systems were fast then.

Sometimes P&L on the screen could move by more than ten million dollars per second.

English: one sentence on one line, not broken where the Chinese breaks

Ch. 9 · Street

Many Languages · "The Pretty Manager"

是一位青春可人的美女主管。
……
我和美女主管一起合作,

Chinese: one epithet, used again and again

she turned out to be a manager—young and lovely.
……
The young manager and I worked together

English: say it once when she appears, then leave her looks alone

Ch. 8 · Net

Source Material · Memory and Diaries

Hardworking · June 2, 1989

Today, after Dad came back from the commune, he kept working without a break. First he cooked, then he harvested the broad beans, until he was dripping with sweat. I thought: when I grow up I must learn from Dad and be as hardworking as he is.

Stealing Bird Eggs · June 3, 1989

Today Dad and I went to the junior high. I played with Fan Zhi while Dad went to teach. I said to Fan Zhi, "Let's go get bird eggs." Fan Zhi said, "OK." We set up a ladder and climbed up for the eggs. Then, by accident, all of a sudden…

https://diary.wu-99.com · translated from a nine-year-old's Chinese

Source Material · Old Photos

But somehow my piece made the final show
and was hung in the county hall.
That exhibition certificate—
I've kept it to this day.
Later Jianyang County became Jianyang City,
but the certificate still carries the old name.

Ch. 3 · Gate

Source Material · Old Photos

Somehow the ball hit me straight on.
Before I could react,
I was pushed up front.
That day I was still wearing
my high school uniform.
I've kept that group photo ever since.

Ch. 5 · Song · Embroidered Ball

Source Material · Old Photos

About how the school gate was still there,
just more run-down.
Mr. Li, who taught chemistry,
was now the principal.
He said my story was written into the town gazette.
We had our picture taken together at the gate that day.

Ch. 8 · Net

Source Material · Old Photos Seattle · Lake View Cemetery · 2010

After about half a minute,
one of the men turned to me and said
they felt deeply honored
that their relative was buried
beside Bruce Lee and his son.
So every time they came,
they always bought two extra bouquets.

Ch. 10 · Valley

Source Material · WeChat Moments

One office perk
was standing in line to pet the dogs—
stroking puppies, they said,
could ease anxiety.
I waited in line a long time
before my turn.

Ch. 10 · Valley

Source Material · WeChat Moments

Many passages in the book
were copied, word for word,
from my old WeChat posts.

I still dream my way back to school.
Whenever I have that dream,
I sleep soundly.

Ch. 12 · Emptiness

Source Material · WeChat Moments

A blonde white girl walked over
and asked for a drag of my cigarette.
……
She smiled,
and she really did take a picture with me.

Ch. 9 · Street

Source Material · WeChat Moments

I ran into Betty Liu in the elevator.
Her leg was bandaged,
……
A little while later, I saw her on TV.
Sitting there, you couldn't tell at all.

That was when it hit me:
they didn't have it easy either.
Smiling
was part of the job.

Ch. 9 · Street

Source Material · WeChat Moments

Later I got full marks on a quiz.
I was so glad I posted it to WeChat Moments—
friends congratulated me.
They knew it wasn't easy.

Ch. 10 · Valley

Source Material · From WeChat to the Book

WeChat Moments · 2019

Damn, these thieves know their stuff!

The book

I have to say,
the thieves in San Francisco
know what's worth taking.

Ch. 10 · Valley

Not Yet in the Book

An egg broken from outside is food;
broken from inside, it is life.
A life broken from outside is pressure;
broken from inside, it is growth.

WeChat Moments · August 20, 2018

A Few Lines from the Book

Emptiness is not absence—
it is making room.

Ch. 12 · Emptiness

Articles aren't written—
they grow.

Ch. 12 · Emptiness

What the times buried wasn't just jobs,
but what people believed.

Ch. 11 · Cloud

Something you think is barely useful to you
might be a lifeline to someone else.

Ch. 9 · Street

How AI Reads This Book

DeepSeek

The stolen limestone rock
becomes the first domino of a lost home.

The MIT sparrow—a stroke of genius.

Doubao

🔥 A poor village boy's legendary comeback!

A comeback is just turning a muddy road
into a smooth path above the clouds.

One read the rock and the sparrow; the other read a rags-to-riches story.
The second is exactly what I tried to avoid when writing it.

The author provides the index;
the reader provides their own world.


Please welcome Aduo

The mood at home was heavy for a while.
Food sat on the table until it was cold
and still my father didn't eat.

Ch. 3 · Gate

Where the Book Changes Real Life

Small changes where they help the prose without changing the substance—this isn't a diary, after all.

  • Big Sister Song → Big Sister Bing
  • The order of my Wall Street experiences was rearranged a little
  • The chorus leader was actually the deputy leader at the time
  • The ninth-grade teacher who docked my points taught politics; the book makes him the chemistry teacher, to keep politics out

A life, maybe,
is mostly held up
by a few words.

Ch. 5 · Song

Liu Cixin Says Where People Are Doesn't Matter Much

Human civilization
may have a ceiling.
……
As for where people will be then?
Not really worth caring about.

Liu Cixin · China Daily interview · September 2025 (paraphrased)

At the moment the cosmos rebooted,
those civilizations
already standing like gods,
perhaps because they couldn't bear to,
actually kept some of their memory.
……
Liu Cixin never said why.

Above the Clouds · Ch. 12 · Emptiness

Others Are Asking the Same Question

Liu Zhiyu, "AI Brute-Forced a Century-Old Problem, and My Mathematician Friends All Broke Down"

The times are not weeding us out;
they are forcing us
to stop being a handy tool
and truly become a whole person.

Liu Zhiyu

Maybe one day
AI will take over the logical work.
Then people will finally be free
to become, fully again,
"sentient beings."

Above the Clouds · Ch. 12 · Emptiness

Turn off the monitor.
Go peel an orange for your mother.
……
These things don't need AI to compute.
Nor will AI ever be able to.

Ch. 12 · Emptiness

Above the clouds—no wind or rain.

But here there is
no wind or rain,
and no clear sky either.
By "way home" I don't mean
returning to any one place.
I mean returning
to what shaped you earliest.

Ch. 12 · Emptiness

Thank You

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